Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have generalised all your points together, instead of commenting on one production at a time.
You have considered the conventions of dance texts and you have started to justify your points, but you need to ensure that you have related your points back to your texts, by including the appropriate images, to support the points that you have made.
You have made a start on considering your texts in further detail, but you need to ensure that relate your points to more detailed examples. For example bright colours does not demonstrate enough understanding of the dance codes and conventions and you need to be more specific with your examples. Therefore, this answer to this question is still basic.
Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have generalised all your points together, instead of commenting on one production at a time.
ReplyDeleteYou have considered the conventions of dance texts and you have started to justify your points, but you need to ensure that you have related your points back to your texts, by including the appropriate images, to support the points that you have made.
You have made a start on considering your texts in further detail, but you need to ensure that relate your points to more detailed examples. For example bright colours does not demonstrate enough understanding of the dance codes and conventions and you need to be more specific with your examples. Therefore, this answer to this question is still basic.
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